Showing posts with label Rachel O'Laughlin. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Rachel O'Laughlin. Show all posts

Wednesday, December 3, 2014

YA Guy Hosts... Rachel O'Laughlin's RISE OF ORION Release-Day Blitz!


YA Guy is beyond thrilled to host the release-day blitz for RISE OF ORION, third in the fabulous Rachel O'Laughlin's Serengard series. (Okay, the book and e-book released yesterday, but still.) An amazing writer, tweeter, and friend, Rachel has constructed a totally original historical fantasy in the Serengard series. Read on for an excerpt and info on where to buy her latest and greatest!

Excerpt:

Mikel had two rooms. The front room held a small bench; the other, where he was now, had a bed with a full mammoth skin on it. There was no furniture in the two cells next to him, and mammoth skin was rare and expensive, fit for a prince. It bothered him whenever he thought of it.

Trzl’s footsteps came around the corner, and then her face was there—sharp, vivid features accented by heavy eye paint and a new combination of braids that pulled the hair up and away. Severe, if ever she was.

“Avoiding my presence?” Her mouth twitched. The light at her back made her shadow against the wall rather foreboding.

Mikel shook his head, but he hadn’t a decent reply.

“I am not as frightful as all that, am I?”

“The last time I saw you, Colstadt was taken to another building for questioning. It’s been a month, and he hasn’t returned.” He looked up at her through hair that fell into his eyes. “Tell me, are you frightful?”

Trzl took three steps toward him. He leaned back until his head hit the wall above his bed, and she stopped moving. “I only kept him near you because you were worried about him. Once his wound was healed, it was indulgent to spoil you with his company. You should understand the pressure I am under.”

Mikel bit the inside of his mouth, his eyes down.

“No need to be sullen, Mikel. I didn’t hurt him.”

“I’ll believe that when I see him.”

Trzl tossed her head and sat down on his bed. “Your food is here. I’m sorry, but you can’t have a knife today.”

“Why should anything change today?” He smiled slightly, but she made no explanation. “Is it pheasant again?”

She slid her hand across the mammoth fur, and her fingers grazed his elbow. He winced. Trzl was the only person who’d touched him since they came here four months ago. As much as he pretended to hate her company, he looked forward to it as he would a strong cup of arabica. Only she never thought to bring him one.

He stood abruptly, slid out from under her arm. 

Her gaze followed him until he had left the room, then she took a few steps and leaned against the doorway. “Do I make you nervous?”

Mikel shrugged, took the food from the guard without lingering, and walked back to the wall. He perched on the bench with one leg sprawled in front and the other half-bent beside him. “I do find myself wondering what you’re doing here.”

“I came to bring a new prisoner and thought I’d see how you were getting on.” Mikel set his plate of food down. “You should have brought ale if you wanted to reminisce.”

She walked to him, picked up his leg, and moved it out of her way so that she could sit next to him. “My apologies. I did forget the ale.” 

There was a quirk to her mouth, as if she knew a secret that made her laugh. Whatever it was, she certainly should not share it. They were, after all, deep in the belly of the Fourth City—a modern atrocity on the ancient soil of Serengard. He’d been brought here with a mask over his eyes, guarded by twelve men, and kept under sporadic watch.

Trzl was the granddaughter of one of the most powerful men in the world, second only to the Emperor; Mikel was the son of the dead king she’d helped overthrow. They were supposed to be enemies.

“Did you give Colstadt pheasant today as well?”

Trzl let out her breath in a huff. “Must you speak of him? I’m tired of hearing his name.”

“Then free him. He presents no danger to you. Keep Pier if you must.”

“I cannot free political prisoners unless they give me something that warrants it, and nothing Colstadt has told me has meant enough to tempt the Emperor.”

Mikel knew she was playing him. Colstadt wouldn’t tell her anything at all.

“Oh, come now,” she said. “You cannot induce me to move him back here. I won’t have you consorting with my imprisoned Drei, Orion, not since I’ve begun questioning. The three of you might prop up each other’s lies.” 

She leaned a shoulder against his, and he didn’t move away. Her eyes were dreamy, and while that was better than distant, he was never sure what to do with her in this state. She twirled a finger around a strand of hair and looked at him with a slight pout.

“You haven’t touched your bread,” she scolded him.

Mikel stared at the wall. “I’ll eat it later.”

“The mice may claim it if you leave it unguarded.”

He lifted the bread between two fingers. “If I return this to you, will you give a double ration to my knights?”

She let out a half-laugh. “Mikel, they are not your knights anymore. They are my prisoners, the same as you are. I give them favors, and someone may begin to think I am in love with one of them.” She laughed, but he didn’t think it was funny. “Mikel, you… You should eat the bread. I swear they are looked after.”

“I saw fresh bruises on Pier.”

“I never meant for you to pass him in the hall.” Her brow furrowed. “But I am sure the Drei can handle pain far better than you.”

“But I am the one who has been chained in cages before.”

“For true?” Her jaw went slack, and her eyes grew suspicious. “You must tell.”

Blurb:

After the Border Wars, Mikel Orion flees Serengard and seeks haven in the Desert of Aldad. Although he and his sister, Kierstaz, must become slaves in order to set foot inside its borders, the hot sands hold a bitter kind of peace—one he hopes to keep. But he risks destroying their newfound stability when he becomes entangled with an Aldadi girl. Aura has tragic secrets of her own, but she gives Mikel a purpose beyond his birthright, and when he leaves the Desert he carries scars that run deeper than skin.

Twelve years later, trouble brews in Serengard that threatens to pull in the Aldadi and the Drei alike. Trapped in a dungeon as the prize prisoner of Trzl—an orchestrator of the rebellion that killed his parents—Mikel is out of maneuvers. Even while Kierstaz gathers a force to attempt his rescue, Trzl transforms more and more into the hypnotic ruler she claims to loathe…and Mikel becomes convinced that peace has never been within his reach at all. 

Author Bio:

Rachel O’Laughlin grew up writing adventure stories on an archaic laptop that only ran one program, couldn’t connect to the Internet, and died every few days—which provided a nice excuse to use a typewriter in the middle of an epic murder scene. After high school, she pushed novels to the backburner for immersion in the arts, tours with her band, and a hands-on education in sustainable living. At last, she admitted to herself that she missed her first love and returned to fiction full time. She lives in New England with her husband and two kids, listens to The Fray, and drinks too many lattes. Rise of Orion is the third book in her epic fantasy series, Serengard.


Tuesday, February 25, 2014

YA Guy Hosts... Rachel O'Laughlin's KNIGHTS OF RILCH Release Day Blitz (plus a giveaway)!

You all remember Rachel O'Laughlin, who visited YA Guy last year to talk about her debut YA fantasy COLDNESS OF MAREK? Well, Rachel's back, this time with the sequel and second book in the Serengard series, KNIGHTS OF RILCH! Rachel's provided a deleted scene from her new book, plus a discussion of why she deleted it, which I thought offers some really cool insight into the writing process. And if you scroll to the end of the post, you'll also find a great Rafflecopter contest!

So, take it away, Rachel! (Ooh, bad pun!)


This scene was originally attached to Chapter 9, but I ended up cutting it for two reasons. One, it was long and rambly and was slowing down the action. Two, it gave a little more info on past Orion reigns and the Drei military than was necessary at that point, so it felt like an info-dump. After taking it out, the scene where Ric gets drunk in Chapter 13 had so much more snap, and Kierstaz gets to react to Ric’s remarks about Queen Izannah in her own scene, which I like far better.


They made a warm camp that night in a circular manner, just beyond a ridge in a glen, east of the river. Their number was just above five and twenty, if one included the armor bearers. Ric could not shake the feeling that he was the only man among them who was truly prepared for a war--perhaps even the only one who knew what it looked like.

I hope winter comes slow…and mild.

As soon as sparks hit the dried grass for the evening fire, Ric started in on them. “Anyone here ever been inside the borders of Dreibourge?”

One of the sons of Romianz--the shorter one--answered. “I have.”

“And you are?”

“Tofer.”

Ric held a cup over the fire, although there was nothing hot enough to warm the liquid yet. “What did you see there?”

Tofer rubbed his hands together in spite of the mild weather. “I saw one of their steep, rounded castles built into a mountain stream bed. Didn’t get to go inside, but I met two of the knights of the Class of Stealth. Very pretty architecture. Not as strong as ours, small, and I don’t know how you’d defend such a thing.”

“It does not need to be as strong as ours,” Ric snorted. “They are more cunning warriors than we.”

Zven, Tofer’s twin, said, “Our people have always been taller. Better built.”

“You are Border Guard. You should know the Drei have the mind for war. Our people are farmers, mostly.” Ric attracted a glare from Mikel but no other warnings, so he continued. “They move with a hard, cold logic; not with the sentimentality of the Seren. Today they come to seize a stronger defensive position against whoever emerges victor in Serengard. They won’t stop until they’ve secured the border castles.”

Ric looked at Mikel, hoping his message was clear. Once you have what is left of the Guard, what then? You will fight the Drei sooner or later if you attempt to hold that border.

Mikel turned away, fingering the clasps of his wrist guards, his armor bearer planted firmly next to him. Ric let his lips curl in amusement. That boy had not been at Ashlin--at least, not with Mikel. Wherever he got his cuts, they were fresher than the battle. The armor bearer saw Ric staring, walked away from Mikel and closer to the twins of Romianz. Tofer raised an eyebrow and settled down next to the fire.

“You’ve a story or two, haven’t you? How do you know much about the Drei?” Tofer prodded.

Ric smiled. “Stories are for nights colder than this one.” But no one else was speaking, so he might as well ramble. “The Drei wish to be one step ahead, to force Kovim to fall back from the border. If they hold that, they’ll have an edge on him. We share an enemy, for now.”

Tofer shrugged. “Are you saying we should back down and let them?”

“I am saying we should consider. The Seren people are burning bridges with friends of peace faster than Altrun Orion did in his day. We may be the saviors--Izannah’s warriors, as the songs say--if only because we’ll meet the same fate.” Ric saw a dark glimmer of recognition between the armor bearer and himself. “You’ve a home in Ashlin, boy?” Ric asked.

The boy looked away.

Ric tipped his head, tried to see the face beneath the helmet. “Did the mob kill your family?” There was no gentle way to ask it.

Zven interrupted, “I think he’s an orphan.”

Ric narrowed his eyes. No, that wasn’t it.

Tofer cleared his throat as if something made him uncomfortable. “I’ve not heard a song of Izannah’s warriors. Not painted in a goodly light.”

The fire was beginning to warm. More of the men slowly removed armor and came closer. Ric would have scoffed at them for following Mikel were he not doing so himself. Perhaps he did it for an old friend.

“Queen Izannah employed a picked force of sport fighters, fresh and angry, an idea borrowed from the Elloyans.” Ric picked at the dirt with a stick. “Her warriors went after the new nobles, brought them in to speak for their crimes against their neighbors, and she sent them as emissaries to those King Altrun had turned against us. Most of them were never seen again. But after that Queen Izannah had enough support to reinstate the Castle Guard and the Border Guard. She preserved Ashlin as the brilliant city we have enjoyed, teeming with life commerce. Although you probably do not remember a day before the unrest of thousands of politicals again brought discontent to the streets.”

Tofer shook his head. He looked annoyed. “I have always lived at the border, and it is a mystery why Queen Izannah needed warriors at all. She hadn’t an armed enemy.”

Ric glanced about him, looking for a face forty years or older, but there were none. “Has your generation not learned a coin’s worth of history?”

“My father tells it differently, as do the trainers of the knights.”

“Before the reign of Altrun, industry was in a boom, trade agreements were seamless. The common folk worked for themselves and for the Kymsai, and the Orion monarchy did little but duel the occasional thief. I say Altrun merely wanted to be remembered, and no one is remembered for keeping the peace the way Allel intended.”

Mikel’s armor bearer shifted, and Ric looked up sharply. Just in time to catch a heavy smirk.

Ric shifted. “Why do you laugh at me?”

The armor bearer just shrugged again. Maybe he was mute, unable to speak.

Zven again had suggestions. “He laughs because you are such a poet?”

Tofer slid a leg out toward the fire and turned so that he was between Ric and the armor bearer. “No Orion would seek to destroy his own rule,” Tofer insisted.

“He did not intend to, surely. Altrun told every man to go to war for himself, to stake his claim on any land he wanted, produce anything he chose, hold any slaves he could, just as Kovim does now. I wonder myself whether he was truly mad.”

Again the armor bearer smirked at him.

“But it was no disaster,” Tofer argued. “As long as an Orion remains on the throne, the fields will produce and the rain will come. A new class of nobles built themselves in the days of Altrun--any who could afford a guard of their own built one. They overthrew some of the Kymsai who had owned property for generations. It was a time of freedom, it is said. Then Queen Izannah reversed what had been gained.”

“Your father tells you this?” Ric snorted.

“Altrun is seen as a hero by everyone.”

Ric knew that, but it was a surprise in the son of Romianz. Ric had assumed the older of the Guard--those who had held rank for generations--would be as dedicated to the rule of Orion as he had been raised to be.

Petrolai, I guess I am all there is.

Ric scuffed at the dirt. “For true, Tofer, I was not there. I’ve been told by those who were that our land was riddled with fright and darkness for thirty years. The reinstated treaties with the Drei and mountain people were, I’ll grant you, flawed--but generally agreed to be better than Altrun’s anarchy.”

Tofer grinned. “All right, old man.”

Ric laughed. “Who you calling old?”

“I just said, I agree with you. Izannah’s warriors were necessary.”

“You bend like a reed, boy. Ciar speaks one mind, Ashlin speaks another. Hold your head up and tell me the world through your own eyes.”

Tofer shrugged. “You said Altrun was mad.”

Ric sobered, distracted by his own thoughts. He remembered being told as a boy that someday Serengard would erupt from within. They would throw off Orion rule simply because they were tired and wanted a change. There was always the promise of something better, something cleaner and purer than what one already had, if they could just find someone to blame and kill said someone. “But we have not met him,” he mumbled to Tofer. “And will never know how mad he could have become.”

© Copyright 2013 by Rachel O’Laughlin

About Knights of Rilch:

When Serengard rebelled and the Orion monarchy fell, former crown princess Kierstaz Orion’s love for her people became a burning desire to set things right. With a price on their heads, Kierstaz and her brother Mikel led a handful of men against the new army, fighting skirmishes all along the border of Dreibourge. But months of heavy bloodshed forced her small band of knights to abandon the border--and all of Serengard--to the rebels.

Nine years and a thousand betrayals later, Kierstaz and Mikel again find themselves on the run--only this time, they’ve a boy in tow: Malcom, the son of two of the Seren rebellion’s strongest leaders. The new regime wants him dead, Mikel wants him alive, and it’s all Kierstaz can do to keep their tracks covered. Desperate to preserve the innocent life she swore to protect and the brother who has always stood by her, Kierstaz must gamble the last thing in the world she owns: her identity. Secrets are a staple of the Orion family, and those Kierstaz keeps are as dangerous as the ones kept from her.

KNIGHTS OF RILCH is the sequel to COLDNESS OF MAREK, and the second book in the SERENGARD Series.

Author Bio:

Rachel O’Laughlin grew up writing adventure stories in which heroines tend to get their hands dirty, bad guys sometimes win, and someone always gets kidnapped. Her passion for history morphed into a love for fantasy in her mid-teens, when she took a brief pause from reality for immersion in the arts and a hands-on education in sustainable living. She lives in New England with her husband and two boys, listens to The Fray, and drinks too many lattes. Two novels in her SERENGARD fantasy series have been released, and a third is scheduled for October 2014.

Author Website: http://rachelolaughlin.com

Sunday, August 11, 2013

YA Guy Hosts... Rachel O'Laughlin! (Plus a giveaway!)


Today on the blog, YA Guy is thrilled to participate in Rachel O'Laughlin's blog tour for her debut novel, the epic fantasy COLDNESS OF MAREK, which was released on August 6. (For the complete tour schedule, click here.) Here's a blurb:

Serengard has been under Orion rule for centuries--centuries of insufferable adherence to laws and traditions that its people no longer believe in. Raised by her scholarly grandfather in the fiery southern city of Neroi, Trzl is dedicated to turning the monarchy into a free society where knowledge is king and no one has to be subject to the whims of an Orion.

As the rebellion escalates, her choices have an eerie impact on the revolution at large, elevating her to a position of influence she has only dreamed of attaining. But there are downsides to her new power that entangle her in a dangerous web of emotions, appearances and alliances. Even as she plays to the attractions of Hodran, a rich nobleman who wants to aid her cause, she is drawn to Mikel, a loyalist farmer who hates the rebellion but just might be winning her heart.

By the time Trzl realizes she is in too deep, she has an infant son and a dark mess of betrayal and lies. She runs to the furthest corner of the kingdom in hopes that she will be left alone with her child, but she has created too many demons. A figure she once trusted will take her captive in the chilling Cliffs of Marek, throw her back into the political upheaval she helped create, and leave her at the mercy of a man she never wanted for an enemy.

Sounds good, yes? And even better, Rachel's giving away a bunch of goodies right here on YA Guy: a print copy of the book, along with some great swag! But before we get to that, let's hear from Rachel about herself, her novel, and her plans for the Serengard series!



YA Guy: Welcome to the blog, Rachel!  Why not start by telling us about yourself: how you became a writer, your path to publication, your favorite fantasy book and movie, all that good stuff!

Rachel O’Laughlin: I always wrote. It was kind of the same as breathing to me--if I didn’t have a manuscript going, I wasn’t really living. As a kid, I wrote stories about my Lego people… I know, I know. Weird! Although I did journal from age 11 to 19, my stories from that era mean way more to me. Two of those manuscripts were over 100k. After I got married, I took a hiatus from stories for almost two years, but I came back to it like I come back to chocolate. I just can’t stop myself from writing.

I decided to self-publish the Serengard Series because I want to let it evolve slowly, rather than tailor the story to a specific audience or market curve. It’s definitely different from a lot of epic fantasy, and self-publishing is complicated and takes a lot of footwork, but I feel that it’s perfect for these books.

I’m going to be cliché here, but my favorite fantasy movie is definitely The Lord of the Rings. There’s just so much depth and beauty in that series. My favorite fantasy book has to be (not really for young readers) A Game of Thrones. I actually don’t love the rest of the series as much as I love the first book. It has a light and a hope in it that I’m not sure the final books will come back to, but Martin’s writing is incredible, and so are his characters.

YAG: I’m a huge LOTR fan myself (but I haven’t read Game of Thrones yet). Now tell us about your book, COLDNESS OF MAREK. What’s your favorite thing about it? (Other than the fact that it’s published, of course!)

RO: My favorite thing? I love the characters’ flaws. I like that the people in it do horrible things and that sometimes there is redemption for it, and sometimes there isn’t. It depends on who they are and if they’re willing to fix what they broke, willing to give back what they took, or forgive someone else for a wrong. I also love the sword fights and rough-and-tumble nature of the setting and times, the fierceness that pervades this kind of fantasy. It’s almost always allegorical, even without me trying to make it so.

YAG: How did you develop Serengard, the land in which COLDNESS OF MAREK takes place? Did you do any research into feudal societies, peasant rebellions, and so on?

RO: I did some research into peasant rebellions, especially focusing on those that turned into full-fledged revolutions. I wanted to recreate that aura, that excitement that the rebellion was going to truly turn the place inside out. I also wanted to touch on the uncertainty of today’s political tangles and the elusiveness of justice. It’s hard to say anyone has ever created the perfect government--there are usually things that slip through the cracks somewhere--and Serengard is as simple a version as I could make of something that is very complex. But as far as the land, I based it mostly on the Ukraine/eastern Europe area, dialed it back to the 12th-14th centuries, and added my own people and my own cultures. Serengard sees itself as a sort of hub, but the other people in this world--the Drei, the Elloyans, and the Aldadi--have equal importance to the elemental balance of the land. That’s one of the things that the main character, Trzl, isn’t willing to see, and that her love interest, Mikel, is.

YAG: One of the interesting things about COLDNESS OF MAREK is that it does without some of the most common elements of epic fantasies: wizards, monsters, semi-human races. This gives the book a more realistic, historical feel than many books in its genre. What made you decide to go in this direction?

RO: My favorite genre is historical fiction, and I almost wanted to write this as an alternative history at one point. But certain fantasy elements started to creep into my mind before I started drafting. First, the idea of cliffs that went on forever. Then the rich cultural background of each of the characters. I desperately wanted to be able to create their history from scratch. And finally, for me, the spiritual elements of the land, which become almost paranormal at times…and I did add a wizard, though he hasn’t been unveiled yet (shh!).

My favorite book EVER is actually not fantasy, although it has a fantasy feel. If you’ve read the Sci-Fi Timeline by Michael Crichton, it’s kind of a perfect example of my desire to merge the historical feels into my fantasy. I desperately needed it to have that in order to go as deep as I wanted with the emotions of the characters.

YAG: Speaking of the characters, I loved the strength and determination of Trzl. (My favorite line is when she says to one of the rebel leaders: “I am as much the rebellion as you are.”) Is there some of you in Trzl?

RO: There may be a little bit of the attitude, hehe, and I’ll admit, I was a great manipulator when I was a teenager. I actually based her personality on someone else I know in order to keep her from becoming me, because I wanted her to be her own person. She even becomes a bit of an antagonist at times (in the sequel), and she couldn’t do that if I always felt her actions were justified. I don’t think I would make the same decisions as her, and I don’t throw myself into a cause the way she does, but I can be a ferocious mama. I think I relate to that harshly protective part of her more than anything.

YAG: What can you tell us about the next book in the Serengard series (without giving away too much cool stuff)?

RO: Okay, this is a little tricky, but here goes. :)

The next book is called Knights of Rilch, and it delves into each of the characters involved in the war, their part in it, and how the conflict affected them. It features a kick-butt warrior heroine and her little brother, along with characters already introduced in Coldness of Marek, especially Colstadt, Tev, and Pier. Almost all of the voices are flipped: minor characters in Coldness of Marek are main characters in Knights of Rilch, and vice versa. The third book in the series will be a shuffled deck as well. Same characters, different voices.

Seriously, I am so freaking excited about the second book. Like, crazy, bouncy excited!

YAG: Thanks for visiting the blog, Rachel! I’m sure readers will want to check out COLDNESS OF MAREK and its sequels!

RO: Thank you so very much for having me on your blog, Josh! This was loads of fun.


To find Coldness of Marek:


Author Bio:

Obsessed with all things history, Rachel O’Laughlin grew up writing adventure stories and only recently fell in love with fantasy as a genre. She lives in New England with her husband and children, grows roses and tweets often. She adores lattes, The Fray, long drives in the country, and any dark story with a good twist. Coldness of Marek is her first novel.


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